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...Why?

He floated in the liquid, his power almost drained. Consciousness was going to fail him soon, and he wasn’t sure that was all that would.
But that wasn’t the worst of it. The worst was that he may not be the only one to go through this.

Ikki... don’t come here... it’s too dangerous...

Some part of what he was thinking must have made it out of his mouth, because he got a reply. “Medabee, you have to tell us where you are!”

No... don’t... please...

No. He couldn’t come here. None of them could, but especially not him. If he came here, there were a million more things that could go wrong. He wished he sounded stronger. He could lie. He could pretend he was fine and kicking butt as usual. But, would Ikki really believe that? Or did he know the medabot too well?

Then he just floated there for what seemed liked forever. Then he heard more talking from the room around him. There was an intruder who had almost made it to the room he was in, and the creeps outside his tube wanted to make sure they were ready to take him out. He knew immediately who he was.

He wanted to yell and scream into Ikki’s meda watch about how much of an idiot he was being. Didn’t he tell the kid to turn back? What was the matter with him?
Did he really care about him that much? After all the junk he had said from the beginning? After how many times he had hurt him? After all the mess ups and the anger and the hate, did his owner really care about him enough to put himself in this much danger for him?

Could Ikki feel that Medabee was not just his medabot... but rather his friend?

...Ikki...

His mouth went numb; the first of his parts to fail him as he began to go into a critical state. No more words were going to be spoken by the medabot at the moment. But he thought that maybe, just maybe, a part of Ikki could hear him still.

...Thank you.

Why was he thankful though? Shouldn’t he have been angry? He had told Ikki not to come, and yet Ikki wasn’t listening! That jerk! He had just made the entire situation worse for himself!

And yet, that exact action left Medabee incredibly moved.

Black out. His optic parts had ceased function. He felt other pieces begin to follow suit, including his medal.

Am... Am I dieing?

He could still hear, but everything seemed so far away, the computers, the people, and there was a struggle, but he was too focused on his own status to care anymore. He didn’t even really focus when the sound moved closer. It was the sound of glass cracking, and water moving around him. He was so tired.

No...

The cracking turned to shattering.

I can’t go yet...

The water around him was rushing.

Not like this...

And a voice. Suddenly his leave seemed to slow down at that. Suddenly he was hanging on, but he was still stuck.

Somebody, help me...

The voice continued. It was different than the others. It wasn’t evil. It was sad.

Please, I have to keep going...

Suddenly, when he was about to slip, the voice cut through the strange, distant feeling.

I still have to make everything up to him...

“Wake up you stubborn piece of junk!”

And his prayer was answered.
©2008-2009 *Netbug009
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Spoilers for Medabots episode "Beetle Mania"

Yay, friendship and angst!

Medabots isn't mine.

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:iconieshanaomiicewolf:
Wow. That is an awesome story. Great job. :3

--
Gibson: Have a nice trip. See you next fall.
(Nova & Otto stare at him)
Gibson: What, only Sprx can make jokes? You'll find I can be most humorous

Knuckles :heart: Cosmo
Sprx-77 :heart: Nova
Hamtaro :heart: Bijou
Pikachu :heart: Buneary
:iconnetbug009:
Thank you! ^^ Anything specific you enjoyed about it?

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"For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son, so that he who believes in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." -John 3:16

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:iconshiro-vii:
Hmm. Advanced critique you say? *wicked grin* lol. j/k.

I like this piece. As I read it, I could kinda feel Medabee's sadness and confusion. But I think it could use some more feeling. As i read, I was drawn in, but I wasn't gripped, per se. It just felt sad, but something like this could have been turned into a real tear-jerker. I dunno if that's what you really wanted, but my honest opinion is that it could have used a pinch more heart. I'm the kindy who likes angst to make my heart race tho, so don't mind me. lol. But as always, a good job. You're writing style is simple and straightforward. The little sentences with just enough to tell you a feeling or the event that's occurring could be used to really adorn a piece. Keep working on this style and you might have something phenomenal. Keep up the good work Netbug!
:iconieshanaomiicewolf:
I really like how you catch Metabee feeling about his friendship with Ikki and what he is going through while he was trap in the tube. :3

--
Gibson: Have a nice trip. See you next fall.
(Nova & Otto stare at him)
Gibson: What, only Sprx can make jokes? You'll find I can be most humorous

Knuckles :heart: Cosmo
Sprx-77 :heart: Nova
Hamtaro :heart: Bijou
Pikachu :heart: Buneary
:iconnetbug009:
Haha. In other words, the whole fic. XD

--
"For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son, so that he who believes in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." -John 3:16

Click to give me an internet> [link]

Jesus is the reason for the season!
:iconnetbug009:
Wow, you want me to go deeper with it? O.o Yeah, I guess there were times I felt like as a writer I kept some distance I suppose. I've never been this deep in a friendship story before though. Maybe I should proofread this stuff and add on more. I'm so impulsive with my one shots. XD

--
"For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son, so that he who believes in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." -John 3:16

Click to give me an internet> [link]

Jesus is the reason for the season!
:iconieshanaomiicewolf:
Yea. :3 I'm a fan of Medabots when I was little. And I was able to see most of the 1st seseons on Youtube. :3

--
Gibson: Have a nice trip. See you next fall.
(Nova & Otto stare at him)
Gibson: What, only Sprx can make jokes? You'll find I can be most humorous

Knuckles :heart: Cosmo
Sprx-77 :heart: Nova
Hamtaro :heart: Bijou
Pikachu :heart: Buneary
:iconshiro-vii:
lol. It's cool. And no, it's cool as is, I'm just adding my two cents. When I read angst, I WANT ANGST! lol. That's how I am with everything I read. If you say Romance I wanna jump in the page and sweep up the girl for myself, that's how involved I like to be in what I read. I guess that's why I put down books so fast when they don't grip me from the beginning.Maybe I'm too picky. Who knows. :hmm:
:iconnetbug009:
Hey, nothings wrong with being picky. Picky people give good reviews. XD

--
"For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten son, so that he who believes in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." -John 3:16

Click to give me an internet> [link]

Jesus is the reason for the season!

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