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A Doctor, Sort Of
Fandom: Unikitty!
Rating: K
Words: 600
Pairings: Hawkodile/Dr. Fox
Summary: Dr. Fox wishes Hawkodile wouldn’t expect so much from her, or at least avoid getting so many stupid injuries.
"How did you even manage this? I thought it was leg day."
"Yeah, leg day: the day I use my arms to walk in case my legs get blown off."
Dr. Fox only sighed in response. The bodyguard had shown up at her lab ten minutes prior and presented her with the forearm he'd managed to snap clean off, trying his best to look completely casual about it despite the pained tears at the edges of his sunglasses.
"Hawkodile, you know my PhD is in Biochem, right?" Dr. Fox asked as she worked on taping back together and slathering ointment on Hawkodile's wound.
"Well yeah but, I mean, you fixed Rick's back just fine."
"Still…" as much as she appreciated having a willing test subject for her experimental healing ointments, her conscience picked at the back of her mind. One of these days, she
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Literature
Something Only Francesco Sees: Chapter 2

Fandom: Cars
Rating: T
Pairings: Francesco/OC, Some Mater/Holley + Lightning/Sally
Summary: Crime never leaves the world of racing alone, and the MI6 never leaves crime alone. But Francesco Bernoulli has bigger problems like finishing off another winning season, preparing his pit crew for the new World Grand Prix, and dealing with an extremely annoying critic. 
Chapter 2
Ghita
"I know you've had some sleep, but try to rest on the plane, alright?"
"You got it!"
"And wait for your escort as soon as you land; don't wander about."
"I hear ya!"
"You remember the code phrase for escort identification?"
"…Uh…"
Holley sighed. She wished she could just see Mater home herself, but there was too much work to be done. She ran Mater through the escort process one more time before sending him off towards his gate. The two waved goodbye to one another with warm – sad – smiles and Holley sighed once Mater was safely on his f
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Literature
Something Only Francesco Sees: Chapter 1

Fandom: Cars
Rating: T
Pairings: Francesco/OC, Some Mater/Holley + Lightning/Sally
Summary: Crime never leaves the world of racing alone, and the MI6 never leaves crime alone. But Francesco Bernoulli has bigger problems like finishing off another winning season, preparing his pit crew for the new World Grand Prix, and dealing with an extremely annoying critic. 
Chapter 1
Two Adventures
If Francesco loved anything almost as much as he loved racing, it was the way the press raced to meet him afterward. The cameras flashed in his eyes blindingly and the chatter was too loud to comprehend – it all overtook his senses in the most magnificent way possible, removing him from reality and placing him ten meters in the air. Twenty if he won. And today – like most other days – Francesco hadn't just won. No, Francesco had absolutely dominated the raceway. It was the final race of the season, and he could have all but not sh
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Literature
House of Mirrors
Fandom: Super Robot Monkey Team Hyperforce Go!
Rating: T
Words: 600
Summary: Mandarin will never be allowed a moment to himself again. Post-Series. 
A/N: MonkeyMindScream thought up the original concept, which I totally mangles. 
Skeleton King's new castle was a monster to navigate, filled to the brim with hallways that all looked the same and formless staff that couldn't offer directions. The towering walls were pure bone, polished so heavily one could see their reflection in it, making the structure even more akin to a confounding house of mirrors.
Mandarin realized he should have been more frustrated than he was, lost in his own home base with nobody but his reflection to talk to, but he found himself less motivated to get outside and take part in battle the more and more he wandered. Between the constant barrage of resentment came the occasional question: Why was he doing any of this? When had his loyalties shifted from wanting to rule Shuggazoom himse
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Literature
Blue Roses
Fandom: Ninjago
Rating: K+
Pairing: Jay/Nya
Words: 1500
Summary: Jay reminisces as he and Nya head together into the future.
Nya and Jay (and Jay's ever-excited parents) had tossed around a lot of ideas, but one thing about the wedding was always a given: blue roses. A single blue rose pinned to Jay's light blue tuxedo. Nya, adorned in a deep red kimono, carrying a blue bouquet. Petals of blue roses cascaded down the white isle that separates the two as the bride enters the room and silences the chatter of friends and family.
Jay can't even hear the strings start to play – all of his senses are focused on staring at his about-to-be wife and telling himself not to faint. He thinks he hears Cole lean over and mutter something to him teasingly but it doesn't register.
Nya sees how smitten Jay looks and the hundreds of awed eyes staring at her and clings tighter to her bouquet to resist fiddling with her hair and destroying hours
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There's Only One
Fandom: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2012)
Rating: T
Pairing: Raph/Mona
Words: 770
Summary: Meanwhile, in Space, the second Raphael has a strange encounter.
Raphael had never been more wrong in his life.
The red turtle had gone to space fully prepared for things to get even weirder than they were on Earth – and seeing how his last adventure back home had involved meeting his time travel double, that was saying something. Between his everyday life and several begrudged Space Heroes marathons, he was certain he was ready for any sort of strange alien creatures, planets, and adventures they might face.
He was so sure that there was nothing left in the Universe that could catch him off-guard, but nothing could have prepared him for when, a few days into their journey, a giant newt girl spotted him from across a crowded space port, marched over to him, grabbed him with her tail and unabashedly kissed him while his brothers watched, dumbfounded.
Through a haze
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Fanfic Beta = 20 Points!

Journal Entry: Sat Jun 17, 2017, 10:36 PM
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I've been getting a lot of requests to do beta reading people's fan fiction, and I've decided to open beta reading commissions for 20 points. This fee gets you up to 2000 words, carefully beta read. Like, printed out, highlighted, redlined, serious editing work. 

"20 cents?? Why bother charging at all?"

Because...
1. Charging a small fee separates people who seriously want their work beta'd from spammers. It's a way for writers to show a level of seriousness about reviewing what I take time to put together for them. 
2. The 20 cents covers printing costs.

"I don't have any points..."

20 points is a really easy amount to scrounge up in less time than I'll spend reviewing your work. I personally find :icondahub: a GREAT way to get some points quickly.

"I don't want a serious business beta of my work. I just wanted to show you a thing I wrote!"

You are still MORE than welcome to do that! I love getting fic recs! Just, please be patient with receiving any sort of reply, since I literally have thousands of fics sitting in my Pocket account waiting to be read. 

I decided to do this because people seemed to be expecting a specific amount of feedback within a fixed time. This is a way to get that.

"Anything else I should know?

1. I reserve the right to refuse a beta reading because the subject matter makes me uncomfortable or if I don't think I'd be able to offer decent feedback for whatever reason. (Of course, I will refund you if this happens.)

2. Usually, my feedback is written by hand and scanned in, so it's in the form of image files. If this doesn't work because you have vision issues/need to use a screen reader, let me know in advance so I can take notes differently.

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I'm a Christian, writer, and all around geek living in the beautiful (if insane) state of Oregon. I love animation and do a bunch of silly doodling related to it.
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OllyYuu Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the fav! Hatsune Miku-03 (Miku's Gift) 
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DA-PrinceAntiTheCD Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I do not think I properly introduced myself. Hello Ms Paradise. I am cartoon reviewer and a future artist. And I got to say you have a beautiful gallery and plus I really enjoy your YouTube channel which I got a chance to witness through a friend. I just wanted to say that you seem like a nice person and hope to be friends in the more future. I will be doing fan arts of various characters and some reviews. Thank you, have a great day and God bless you. :D
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Netbug009 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2017  Student Writer
Nice to meet you and thank you! ^^
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DA-PrinceAntiTheCD Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
A shout out to a very intelligent woman. ;)

Top YouTube Female Cartoon Reviewers
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Netbug009 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Student Writer
Woah! Thanks! :D 
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HolleyShiftwell3 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi
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Netbug009 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2017  Student Writer
Howdy! How you been?
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HolleyShiftwell3 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
Good. And you?
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Netbug009 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2017  Student Writer
Alright!
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